i thougt it was preaty good very original it did not have a very big inpact on me but i thought it was good so i think that you should try the backround was preaty bland and that i think that you should try harder next time on that aspect. finalyy i have to talk about your vishon all i have to say is meh not good not bad but you cant really ask for much.
a few things you chould do is maybe put some more shadeing and maybe a backroud so i want heres a brofist axelfirekirby out!